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Bus Station- 
 

cut to her on bus headphones-

flashback her parents laughing -

shot of door closing-

multiple shots of her arguing with parents

some good times-

pace build-

cuting to bus-

door slaming-

THIS IS US as the inspiration

flash back and flash forward-

Intersperse  between - juxtapose child having fun - with teenager arguing-

REALLY WELL IS TO BASE IT OFF THAT FOOTAGE AND MATCH THE ACTION

Voiceover to do - 'wish I could go back etc'

Name like - The Do over

Voice Over- 'If you found out you could change the past... would you'

'What if you could look back in time... would you?'

One where she's in the library - Mum waiting outside

one where shes at a bus station - no mum

one where she's  arguing with the mum

one where she's visiting a grave stone-

MAKE SURE THE PARENT RELATIONSHIP IS CENTRAL-

Back to the future

butterfly effect

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