teacher feedback on my idea
Bus Station- cut to her on bus headphones- flashback her parents laughing - shot of door closing- multiple shots of her arguing with parents some good times- pace build- cuting to bus- door slaming- THIS IS US as the inspiration flash back and flash forward- Intersperse between - juxtapose child having fun - with teenager arguing- REALLY WELL IS TO BASE IT OFF THAT FOOTAGE AND MATCH THE ACTION Voiceover to do - 'wish I could go back etc' Name like - The Do over Voice Over- 'If you found out you could change the past... would you' 'What if you could look back in time... would you?' One where she's in the library - Mum waiting outside one where shes at a bus station - no mum one where she's arguing with the mum one where she's visiting a grave stone- MAKE SURE THE PARENT RELATIONSHIP IS CENTRAL- Back to the future butterfly effect